Here is the passage :
"The introduction clause for the universal quantifier is a bit more complicated. Suppose that a sentence θ contains a closed term t, and that θ has been deduced from a set of premises Γ. If the closed term t does not occur in any member of Γ, then θ will hold no matter which object t may denote. That is, ∀vθ
follows.
(∀I)
For any closed term t, if Γ⊢θ(v|t), then Γ⊢∀vθ provided that t is not in Γ or θ".
First point : Something I do not understand is that the preliminary remark suggests that $t$ is contained in $\theta$ while the official statement of the rule requires this not to be the case.
Second point : Also, should we not have :
If, for any closed term $t$, $\Gamma |-\theta(v,t) $, then $\Gamma |- \forall v\theta$
instead of
For any closed term t, if Γ⊢θ(v|t), then Γ⊢∀vθ ?
I mean, in order the universal statement to be deduced, should it not be required that the substitution works for any closed term? ( It seems to me that in the official rule, " for any closed term" applies to the whole conditional, not to the antecedent in particular.)
Does the alternative reading I suggest make any difference? What do I miss?