I have started sending emails to professors in Tohoku University in japan to pursue my graduate studies in Medical Science. The following is the sample email which I am sending. I am a medical doctor and I don't have any undergraduate research experience. Can I get some opinion on how it sounds? Also should I make any modifications to increase my chances of getting responses? Thank you.
Dear Professor “Professor's name",
I hope this email finds you well. My name is Afsana Rahman. I have completed my Bachelor of Medicine and Bachelor of Surgery (MBBS) from Rangpur Medical College, Rajshahi University, with a first-class honours degree in Bangladesh in May 2018. I am very interested in developing my career in Medical research, which motivated me to pursue Graduate Studies in Medical Science at Tohoku University.
My TOEFL iBT overall score is 103 out of 120. After completing my one-year internship training program at Rangpur Medical college in May 2019, I have been working as a Medical Officer in Rabeya Clinic and Nursing Home, Gaibandha, Bangladesh since September 2019. It is an independent healthcare establishment dedicated to providing comprehensive healthcare within a vast area of North Bengal. I am also working as a Lecturer at North Bengal Medical Assistant Training School in Gaibandha, Bangladesh since December 2019.
I have been through your website and studied details on your research topics and publications. Your research theme on new drug delivery system for retinal disease by developing deployment type nanosheets creation technology for sustained long-term drug administration to the retina has struck me as revolutionary and inspiring. As my future goal is to be a cutting-edge researcher in this field, it would be a great honor if you kindly consider me in your research group and provide me the opportunity to enhance my potential under your guidance.
I have attached my Curriculum Vitae and Academic transcripts for your kind consideration. I will be at your disposal if you need any kind of detailed information. Please let me know if any opportunity is present for me.
Sincerely Yours, Afsana Rahman, MBBS (Rajshahi University), Bangladesh.