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Alice and Bob both go to a conference. Alice gives a great talk, and most people understood it. Bob gives a much more technical talk filled with jargon which almost everyone failed to understand. Do people walk out of the talk thinking Alice must've done something simple while Bob did something profound?

I get the feeling that this happens - after all given two concepts, one which I understand and the other which I don't, it's intuitive that the one I understand is the simpler one. It also feels like the easier-understood the talk is, the more questions Alice receives that aren't directly related to her work. For example I once attended a talk where the speaker talked about aggregating samples of the sky, and someone asked "why do you use square samples? Why not circles or triangles?". This kind of non-specialist question is obviously hard to see coming, and the you-either-know-it-or-you-don't result is uncomfortable.

On the other hand, if it's indeed true that giving easily-understood talks makes people think you did something simple, it would imply that giving comprehensible talks is a bad thing. That not only sounds silly, it's also counterproductive.

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    Isn't this question entirely opinion based? I mean, I could answer it as a single person who sometimes makes up part of an audience and tell you the answer is "no" but even that is subject to my own biases. It almost certainly depends on the audience as well. – Bryan Krause Dec 11 '18 at 00:05
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    I think the more usual concern for Alice is that experts in the audience may be frustrated by the missing details, since they will not get a full understanding of what she actually did. And the experts' opinions are typically more important to the speaker than those of non-specialists. Many people try to aim for a compromise - part of the talk being more accessible, and another part containing more technical details. That's not to say that everyone strikes the right balance, of course. – Nate Eldredge Dec 11 '18 at 00:10
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    This calls for a quantitative study. The perception that too-understandable talks will be misconstrued as shallow certainly exists; some seminars (the MIT combinatorics seminar, I think) are aggressively reminding speakers to keep the prerequisites low. – darij grinberg Dec 11 '18 at 00:15
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    @BryanKrause It doesn't feel opinion-based to me - it's something that's answerable by e.g. a survey of the audience. – Allure Dec 11 '18 at 00:26
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    You could come up with counter examples for every which way. For example, I went to a talk by a prof who was detailing all the work she had done on multiple continents with the military and then back at home. Was it complicated to talk about? No. Did it make me feel like she was doing something simple? No, absolutely not. That might have been the most complex project I've heard of in my field. – Azor Ahai -him- Dec 11 '18 at 00:58
  • The purpose of a talk is to generate interest in your work. In both cases, if the idea or work is sufficiently interesting, then I would pursue the work/idea further. In both cases, the title or the first few slides should be sufficient to pique the audience's interest. In Alice's case, since she presented the work well, then she has saved me the trouble of understanding the work at a deeper level and allows me to evaluate whether the work is valuable to my own research during her talk. In Bob's case, I need to do some additional work. I will do it if I'm interested. – Prof. Santa Claus Dec 11 '18 at 01:58
  • @Allure Which audience? For whose talk? In which field? In what context? – Bryan Krause Dec 11 '18 at 04:18
  • "Bob gives a much more technical talk filled with jargon which almost everyone failed to understand." would leave me with the impression that Bob needs to learn giving better talks. A talk and its technical depth should be tailored to the audience. If most people in the audience don't understand the talk it's just a waste of everyone's time. –  Dec 11 '18 at 07:21
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    I know this is a hypothetical situation but unconscious gender bias may play a role, leading people to perceive Alice's work as less complicated. – astronat supports the strike Dec 11 '18 at 09:18
  • @BryanKrause I don't understand what you mean. If you're saying it depends on the conference/talk/etc, then the same goes for most of the questions on Academia.SE (depends on the professor/university/journal etc). – Allure Dec 11 '18 at 10:08
  • Actually, different people in the audience will answer differently because of their background and their interest in the subject. What "the audience" thinks is up to them, individually. But, objectively, an easy to understand talk doesn't imply a simple solution. It would be foolish to claim it. Some people have a gift for making the complex comprehensible. Many public scholars (Carl Sagan, for example) have a second career doing just this. – Buffy Dec 11 '18 at 15:47

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I will tell you what I've observed in Math. Similar to what Jordan Ellenberg says in How not to be wrong, one can think of depth and technicality as two orthogonal axes, so one has 4 rough categories of results:

  1. Deep and simple (technically easy)

  2. Deep and hard/technical

  3. Shallow and simple

  4. Shallow (unimportant) and technical

Some people like things that are more technical and some people like things are simple, but deep. For instance, Atle Selberg thought that the most profound ideas in math are simple and said all of his ideas were simple ones.

Correspondingly some people are more easily impressed by technical talks and some people are more easily impressed by simple talks. So my answer to:

Do people walk out of the talk thinking Alice must've done something simple while Bob did something profound?

would be, while it of course depends on the audience, I think this depends largely on the talk. If you can explain a simple idea that lets you solve long-standing open problems, I think most people will agree this is deep. However if your talk doesn't make it clear you're solving long-standing open problems, then people will be unsure. And you certainly want to avoid giving a talk that is shallow and simple, as no one will be impressed.

I myself generally prefer (giving and listening to) understandable talks, and here are a couple other pieces of advice:

  • Even if you don't want to present technicalities, make it clear to the audience that technicalities are present, and maybe make a few comments to the experts as to how you handle them.

  • What may seem simple to you, who have been thinking about these things for months or years, may not seem simple to others. I've many times given talks and worried that it was too simple for the experts in the audience, and found out later that many of them didn't completely understand what I said beyond the introductory material.

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No.

People are impressed by Alice's presentation skills, and her ability to explain a complex subject in a way that can be digested in a short talk.

Obviously a few people are impressed by impenetrable jargon, but trying to impress them does the rest of your audience a disservice. The purpose of a presentation is to communicate ideas. If almost nobody understood Bob's presentation, then Bob has failed.

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