Your proof seems a little bare to me. If I didn't already know the proof, I would struggle to follow your reasoning here. Also, the claim is not quite true, specifically if $n$ is a power of $10$. For example, $\log_{10}(100) = 2$, but $100$ has $3$ digits. Instead, it really should be $\lfloor \log_{10}(n) \rfloor + 1$.
The heart and soul of the proof is, a number with $k$ digits lies between $10^{k-1}$ and $10^k$, including the former, excluding the latter. A number $n$ with $k$ digits takes the form
$$n = a_{k-1}10^{k-1} + a_{k-2}10^{k-2} + \ldots + 10a_1 + a_0,$$
where $a_0, \ldots, a_{k-1} \in \{0, \ldots, 9\}$, and $a_{k-1} \neq 0$ (otherwise $n$ would have at most $k - 1$ digits). Since each power of $10$ is positive, we obtain a lower bound
$$n \ge 1 \cdot 10^{k - 1} + 0 \cdot 10^{k - 2} + \ldots + 0 \cdot 10 + 0 = 10^{k - 1},$$
and an upper bound
$$n \le 9 \cdot 10^{k - 1} + 9 \cdot 10^{k - 2} + \ldots + 9 \cdot 10 + 9 = 10^k - 1 < 10^k.$$
That is, $10^{k - 1} \le n < 10^k$, and since $\log_{10}$ is strictly increasing,
$$k - 1 = \log_{10} (10^{k - 1}) \le \log_{10}(n) < \log_{10}(10^k) = k.$$
This implies that $\lfloor \log_{10}(n) \rfloor = k - 1$, so $k$, the number of digits, is $\lfloor \log_{10}(n) \rfloor + 1$.